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- Sun Jan 22, 2012 12:13 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Abduction (Lyrical concept)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1619
Abduction (Lyrical concept)
Abduction (Lyrical concept) By Davin Casey Circulate, Circulate, All around, and encapsulate me. Penetrate, Elevate, Call me up, and Overwhelm me. You've already abducted the best of us all, Tainted him deep With malevolent flows. Just sitting and waiting and picking at the scabs Is tiring, Humilia...
- Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:35 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Transfiguration.
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3031
Re: Transfiguration.
Beautiful. Had to break from my silence to post about it.
- Wed Sep 28, 2011 11:16 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Lover
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2182
- Mon May 16, 2011 11:33 pm
- Forum: Members' Poetry Vaults
- Topic: Odd D
- Replies: 3
- Views: 7767
Re: Odd D
The Death and Birth of Mother Mirth, A Dragon's Tale The flighty romance of insomniac and dragon, rise and fall. Prayer Submerged below, you blend so well With deep blue seas, and reds of hell. Remarkable, isn't she, The Sapphire Queen? Truth be told, only time will tell. The image of your beauty F...
- Tue Apr 12, 2011 12:29 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Lover
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2182
Lover
Lover By Davin Casey Lover, You’ve created a monster. Friction left you so lackluster. Tears and blood had fed your children. All the sin within your temple Made it look like you were guilty. Cables bare against the ocean, Tortured by the ceaseless waves, All you needed were disciples; Just a dozen...
- Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:48 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Don't have to Bleed
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4655
Re: Don't have to Bleed
Ah, ha ha, yes... All fair enough explanation to me. Go on with your methods, you loon.
Side Note: I <3 semi-colons.
Side Note: I <3 semi-colons.
- Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:11 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Don't have to Bleed
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4655
Re: Don't have to Bleed
I, like Mr. H, have noticed your use of commas and "..." and such in several poems of yours as well. While by no means do I think there is any crazy rule regarding this, I would perhaps like to share my opinion, if you don't mind... It looks a mite sloppy.The commas ( and "..." and whatnot, you know...
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:53 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Window Slams Shut
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4279
Re: The Window Slams Shut
It does? Well fabulous!Just Me wrote:Flows beautifully
Ha ha, I didn't really mean for it to, but it's great that it turned out that way. Thanks for the comment.
- Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:30 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Window Slams Shut
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4279
Re: The Window Slams Shut
I'm in awe! That flows so wonderfully as i'm listening to just you and me by chicago in my headphones! I just noticed who you are. Heh, Awe, eh? Well that's perfectly fine with me. Sadly, I don't know the track! Ha ha, So I'm afraid to say the poem wasn't meant to sync with it in anyway. Glad you g...
- Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:22 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Window Slams Shut
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4279
Re: The Window Slams Shut
Fabulous! I'm happy to hear that it warranted being read twice.moonflower wrote:i read this twice and loved it both times..it held me captured from beginning to end!
Thank you much for the comment, Moonflower. :D
- Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:49 am
- Forum: Poeticpiers Master of Form
- Topic: Lady in waiting.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 7663
Re: Lady in waiting.
The most important part of a poem, in my opinion, is the final line.
And you NAILED it with this poem! Chilling, depressing, exciting... Ha ha, It was excellent all around, though! Thank you for sharing.
And you NAILED it with this poem! Chilling, depressing, exciting... Ha ha, It was excellent all around, though! Thank you for sharing.
- Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:37 am
- Forum: Community Favorites, Poem of the Week and Poet of the Month
- Topic: March 2011 Poet of the Month ~ bags123
- Replies: 7
- Views: 9558
Re: March 2011 Poet of the Month ~ bags123
Congratulations, sir bags! You're certainly most deserving.
If anyone wants to dispute this, I challenge them to an e-spar. My representative in the spar shall be... Bags. :)
But seriously. Congrats and junk. :D
If anyone wants to dispute this, I challenge them to an e-spar. My representative in the spar shall be... Bags. :)
But seriously. Congrats and junk. :D
- Sat Feb 26, 2011 2:44 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Window Slams Shut
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4279
The Window Slams Shut
The Window Slams Shut By Davin Casey Here, Lost in your vision, I’ve found Solace in the clutches of a beast, Where I’ll discover myself. A murging of the conscience and the soul, One becomes whole, All becomes new. But passion survives in every hue. In a blink, Momentarily eternal, You were naked ...
- Tue Jan 18, 2011 12:18 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Refreshing Pools
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1610
Refreshing Pools
Refreshing Pools By Davin Casey Refreshing pools, Twins upon this magnificent glen - Inside of these, I have seen unexposed compassion. Beautiful gold, The light inside rejuvenates me. Wakening cold, Their waters break the mundane cycle. A nurturing Spirit bathes within their mirrored face. Her lul...
- Fri Jan 14, 2011 11:21 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 10688
Re: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
I envision a bat as one of the creatures. At first I was thinking bat and bird, but I'm doubting myself very seriously on that now. Now I'm thinking spider and... Meh, I dunno. :shrug: Ha ha I do have to agree with Mr. H here in that I find a few parts a spot choppy. Particularly the beginning, when...