Poetry Pages

this deserves another look!

all that fuss and it was the dog

old year is winding down each of us will choose to close 2011 in our own way thats how the story goes we gather to us our family hold each other tight as the seconds count down at the end of this night or, some will decide that drinking is the thing partying with our buds singing dancing and finally...

hahahahaha

i liked this one heinz

this one needs another chance to be seen!!

good write, good read

ok, that was cute....my 6 year old laughed the whole time!

well i liked the poem

but, if i may give some advice

i would like to say that changing style mid poem kinda messed up the flow and i stumble a bit at the end

other wise good write, good read

i like it

simple and moving

good write good read

they fixed some of their issues, i made my kids a playlist not to long ago to clean up their mess too
but the cute stuff IS a bonus so i cant say i blame you for saying no to the playlist idea

you know saturn, you ought to take all these songs, go to project playlist and build a player then post a link to it, would make it easier accesing and you can just edit the playlist when someone wants to add a new one

lol
very cute
good write, good read

Ladysaturn and well you know it......

bags123 wrote:Sticks and stones will break my bones,...but names will never hurt me.

*groans*
now youve gone and done it bags
you do realize saturn is gonna take that as a personal challenge right??