Poetry Pages

Hope it's not that bad to be unworthy any comment? - -

Thanks for your comment and suggestion, I am always grateful for a advice.
Perhaps because I have written these stanzas, I myself cannot recognize any lack of clarity. Your explanation though is highly regarded. *angel

Care There's silence from your end Worries I try to defend Hopes I encourage too for I'm concerned about you. Perhaps much work you will tell One day even casts for a spell Questions I may not yet dare Believe me for you I do care. Can't help I worry sometimes Know, I wish you to be fine Never I wa...

This poem is strongly talking to me and I can relate to your thoughts about memories. Lets hope and act the way that at the final stage of our life, the main memories are happy ones. Thank you. *angel

Beautiful poem Jetz, and because I can just relate to this imagery I love it even more.
Thank you! *angel

Great metaphoric poem here and very profound expression of the essence of seasons.
Thank you for sharing. *angel

Beautiful poem and the emotions stirred by this twilight melody so perfectly caught.
Thanks. *angel

One more of these pleasures to enjoy reading Jetz. Dreams can tell so much and they are never just empty dreams, always they have some meaning and come from deep in our soul. Thanks for sharing! *angel

Your poetry is special Jetz, great messages, partly metaphoric, wonderful work, thanks.
*angel

Awesome poem Jetz, very well composed, very touching phrases, beautiful imagery, enjoyed it so much, thank you! *angel

Keep Beauty aglow God is painting the sunrise with His hand No matter spectacular thunder rolls His creation we are of dust and sand And daily on us all this beauty falls. Nature’s beauty is known to all mankind Day rise, sunset, snowfall or trickle of rain In gentle hearts at that beauty inside Aw...

In addition to the strong message, I appreciate the flow and rhyme of your write, thank you. *angel

A very lovely poem, showing hopes and doubts of love with space for trust to grow. Thank you. *angel

Once, the wind blew a brush of love Which now is burnt into my skin, Then a soft and gentle voice in move, Leaving a tremble, a smile within. This is how I felt our love appear New worth of life on angel’s wings, This touch never left me since, my Dear It’s a serenade which true love brings. Your na...