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by angeltears
Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:42 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Keep Beauty aglow
Replies: 4
Views: 937

Re: Keep Beauty aglow

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Hope it's not that bad to be unworthy any comment? - -
by angeltears
Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:38 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Care
Replies: 2
Views: 669

Re: Care

Thanks for your comment and suggestion, I am always grateful for a advice.
Perhaps because I have written these stanzas, I myself cannot recognize any lack of clarity. Your explanation though is highly regarded. *angel
by angeltears
Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:43 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Care
Replies: 2
Views: 669

Care

Care There's silence from your end Worries I try to defend Hopes I encourage too for I'm concerned about you. Perhaps much work you will tell One day even casts for a spell Questions I may not yet dare Believe me for you I do care. Can't help I worry sometimes Know, I wish you to be fine Never I wa...
by angeltears
Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:37 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Memories.
Replies: 3
Views: 850

Re: Memories.

This poem is strongly talking to me and I can relate to your thoughts about memories. Lets hope and act the way that at the final stage of our life, the main memories are happy ones. Thank you. *angel
by angeltears
Sun Jul 26, 2009 1:29 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: The Cliff
Replies: 6
Views: 881

Re: The Cliff

Beautiful poem Jetz, and because I can just relate to this imagery I love it even more.
Thank you! *angel
by angeltears
Sun Jul 26, 2009 1:28 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Awakening
Replies: 2
Views: 622

Re: Awakening

Great metaphoric poem here and very profound expression of the essence of seasons.
Thank you for sharing. *angel
by angeltears
Sun Jul 26, 2009 1:26 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Nightingales
Replies: 3
Views: 689

Re: Nightingales

Beautiful poem and the emotions stirred by this twilight melody so perfectly caught.
Thanks. *angel
by angeltears
Sat Jul 18, 2009 9:45 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Another Life
Replies: 9
Views: 1469

Re: Another Life

One more of these pleasures to enjoy reading Jetz. Dreams can tell so much and they are never just empty dreams, always they have some meaning and come from deep in our soul. Thanks for sharing! *angel
by angeltears
Sat Jul 18, 2009 9:43 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Life Mates
Replies: 1
Views: 501

Re: Life Mates

Your poetry is special Jetz, great messages, partly metaphoric, wonderful work, thanks.
*angel
by angeltears
Sat Jul 18, 2009 9:41 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Butterfly Dreams
Replies: 3
Views: 732

Re: Butterfly Dreams

Awesome poem Jetz, very well composed, very touching phrases, beautiful imagery, enjoyed it so much, thank you! *angel
by angeltears
Sun Jul 12, 2009 1:43 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Keep Beauty aglow
Replies: 4
Views: 937

Keep Beauty aglow

Keep Beauty aglow God is painting the sunrise with His hand No matter spectacular thunder rolls His creation we are of dust and sand And daily on us all this beauty falls. Nature’s beauty is known to all mankind Day rise, sunset, snowfall or trickle of rain In gentle hearts at that beauty inside Aw...
by angeltears
Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:52 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Forever Seeking Closure....sigh
Replies: 8
Views: 1545

Re: Forever Seeking Closure....sigh

In addition to the strong message, I appreciate the flow and rhyme of your write, thank you. *angel
by angeltears
Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:51 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Wondering why you left.....
Replies: 11
Views: 1944

Re: Wondering why you left.....

A very lovely poem, showing hopes and doubts of love with space for trust to grow. Thank you. *angel
by angeltears
Tue Aug 12, 2008 2:05 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Our Love
Replies: 1
Views: 680

Re: Our Love

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by angeltears
Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:17 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Our Love
Replies: 1
Views: 680

Our Love

Once, the wind blew a brush of love Which now is burnt into my skin, Then a soft and gentle voice in move, Leaving a tremble, a smile within. This is how I felt our love appear New worth of life on angel’s wings, This touch never left me since, my Dear It’s a serenade which true love brings. Your na...

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