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- Tue Mar 04, 2008 2:12 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Change in Time
- Replies: 8
- Views: 6161
Re: Change in Time
Loved it, especially the last stanza. Well written, great tempo. If I may add a tiny suggestion . . . wouldn't you rather say "too late" instead of "to late"?
- Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:23 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Pieces of a soul
- Replies: 12
- Views: 8899
Re: Pieces of a soul
Aw, thanks so much.
Wow, this thing is ancient. Feels like I wrote it in another lifetime. Maybe I did.
Wow, this thing is ancient. Feels like I wrote it in another lifetime. Maybe I did.
- Tue Jan 29, 2008 1:04 pm
- Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
- Topic: Words Missing Can Hurt More Than Words Said
- Replies: 0
- Views: 2111
Words Missing Can Hurt More Than Words Said
Another dreary Tuesday morning, and she wishes she was somewhere else, somewhere very far away. Images of home, of another country, pass through her thoughts but vanish before they can depress her. She doesn’t like it here, and she considers January to be the ‘depressing’ month of the year. Not for ...
- Mon Jan 21, 2008 12:11 pm
- Forum: Briefs:
- Topic: just so you know
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6476
Re: just so you know
Exactly what I was thinking.
Maybe reality is a mash-up of the dreams and nightmares of all people. We all end up contributing, in the end.
Excellent write
Maybe reality is a mash-up of the dreams and nightmares of all people. We all end up contributing, in the end.
Excellent write
Re: **found**
Inside of hopeless tears
Darkness like oxygen feeding the fire
Determination
- Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:45 am
- Forum: Briefs:
- Topic: all positive or real.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2487
Re: all positive or real.
C'est la vie
Muchly enjoyed
Muchly enjoyed
- Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:43 am
- Forum: Briefs:
- Topic: Words Unspoken
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5422
Re: Words Unspoken
Beautifully written.
Re: Words
But most people don't listen, so sometimes you have to scream a little.
Re: Words
Thank you!
I wish I could say more than just 'thank you' but I can't think of anything. :]
I wish I could say more than just 'thank you' but I can't think of anything. :]
- Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:53 pm
- Forum: Important Information
- Topic: Happy Belated Birthday PoetryPages.com!
- Replies: 28
- Views: 54823
Re: Happy Belated Birthday PoetryPages.com!
happy happy birthday happy happy birthday
Re: Words
thank you
Words
Speak words unspoken
To undo your absences
And maybe they’ll hear
To undo your absences
And maybe they’ll hear
- Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:27 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Goodbye
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3519
Re: Goodbye
It was a pleasure to write.
I'm a little short on words now, and I wish I could say more.
But thank you for the kind comment.
- Fri Nov 09, 2007 3:25 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Goodbye
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3519
Goodbye
Regret Murmur it’s not right You can’t stand the thought of being alone Yet you wait to leave To destroy the chance Of hurting me Because you can’t stand to hurt me Why Why are you running? Where Where do you think you’ll find your peace? Save your soul the agony Because there’s nothing more to live...
- Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:11 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Procrastination
- Replies: 8
- Views: 5000