Search found 23 matches

by beautifullyburnt
Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:43 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Lazy Afternoon
Replies: 5
Views: 1759

Re: Lazy Afternoon

Thanks for the bump Heinzs! It's appreciated.

Slayer, thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it.

BB
by beautifullyburnt
Fri Jul 25, 2008 2:28 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Lazy Afternoon
Replies: 5
Views: 1759

Lazy Afternoon

As the leaves rustle, high above, offering a protection from the blazing sun, the wind is naught but a soft breeze, turning the pages of time. The blanket is soft, warmed by the rays, tenderly it carresses the ground below. Birds fly in the hidden sky, their song a distant murmur. Hours pass with no...
by beautifullyburnt
Fri Jul 13, 2007 4:23 pm
Forum: Poet Laureate April 2007 - September 2007: Spazway
Topic: First one to come to mind
Replies: 15
Views: 12167

My favourite poem would be "Jabberwocky" Because of the memories it stirs up of a summers day in my living room with my dad. I was seven-ish and knew it off by heart. (There were also figurines involved ina re-enactment of it. Hehe XD) My favourite poet, however cheesey this may sound is my dad. His...
by beautifullyburnt
Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:08 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: In a Teen's Eyes - The Love Cycle
Replies: 6
Views: 2340

Glad to have been of help!
I really like your work and hope to keep reading it and if wanted and necessary helping it develop.

BB
by beautifullyburnt
Thu Mar 29, 2007 12:51 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: In a Teen's Eyes - The Love Cycle
Replies: 6
Views: 2340

Hey, I love the emotion in this poem however I think a few things could be tweaked to help the flow and meaning. Here are a few of my thoughts: That never really said what we really feel I think one of the 'really's should be changed or removed. She said I was perfect Rare does a man like me appear ...
by beautifullyburnt
Wed Mar 28, 2007 5:04 am
Forum: Poets Laureate Program Notes and General Discussion
Topic: Poet Laureate nominations now closed
Replies: 22
Views: 13565

I agree, Drew should get it!
by beautifullyburnt
Sat Feb 03, 2007 3:08 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Truth
Replies: 7
Views: 3673

Thank you all!
Such warm praise, and for one of my lesser poems.

Thanks again for your kind words.

BB
by beautifullyburnt
Tue Apr 04, 2006 8:52 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Letters
Replies: 2
Views: 1595

Dear You, I am sorry for not sharing my troubles, but the darkness of your world was suffocating me. Your mind flies through the deepest parts of the universe before once agaion revealing the truth that is me. My memories, are yours. You free me less often than you used to. Do you not need me anymor...
by beautifullyburnt
Mon Apr 03, 2006 2:12 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Letters
Replies: 2
Views: 1595

Letters

Dear Me, Did I scare you away? Did you find my thoughts too dark to frequent? I wish you'd've told me, I didn't realise you'd gone until this morning when you didn't greet me as I woke. Instead it was an empty room, an empty mind and an empty heart. The sun was weak, it's faint tendrils of warmth di...
by beautifullyburnt
Mon Apr 03, 2006 1:18 pm
Forum: Poets Laureate Program Notes and General Discussion
Topic: Poetry Pages Poet Laureate: April - Sept 2006
Replies: 15
Views: 12273

Yay! Well done Ninian!
by beautifullyburnt
Wed Mar 01, 2006 11:44 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Perfect Civilisation (Edited)
Replies: 2
Views: 1261

Perfect Civilisation (Edited)

She looked out at the bleak, grey city. The rain ran down the window, creating little patterns like rivers, it was a dark day – too dark. She huddled up on the window seat her knees pulled in close. She sat for hours, just looking. The people moved on the street far below like ants on a tree branch....
by beautifullyburnt
Thu Feb 23, 2006 2:52 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Changes
Replies: 4
Views: 2084

Thanks,
I like this one. Though I think there's definite room for improvement, maybe make it even eerier? (Is that a word?)

BB
by beautifullyburnt
Thu Feb 16, 2006 12:36 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Changes
Replies: 4
Views: 2084

Changes

Dumping her woolly ‘Shaun the Sheep’ bag by the back door, Samantha Leigh returned home after the worst week ever! It was Friday at about 4 in the evening. No one was home. The house was silent. Tears fell from her beautiful blue eyes, her eyelashes stuck together. Her lower lip was bright red; she’...
by beautifullyburnt
Sat Feb 11, 2006 1:55 pm
Forum: Community Favorites, Poem of the Week and Poet of the Month
Topic: Poem of the Week: February 12, 2006
Replies: 8
Views: 3742

Thank you Debbie.

Much appreciated.

BB
by beautifullyburnt
Sat Feb 11, 2006 1:49 pm
Forum: Community Favorites, Poem of the Week and Poet of the Month
Topic: Poem of the Week: February 12, 2006
Replies: 8
Views: 3742

Thank you all of you for your support.

BB

Go to advanced search