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by Asher
Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:23 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Mystery of The Darkness - Part 1 BEGINNINGS
Replies: 5
Views: 1776

awesome! I live and have lived in CO for years now.. may make the story more appealing.
by Asher
Sat Apr 15, 2006 7:33 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Mystery of The Darkness - Part 1 BEGINNINGS
Replies: 5
Views: 1776

is this by chance taking place in Colorado?

I dunno.. scanning through I saw rocky mountains (?) and Aspen.. I haven't read the whole thing "yet" but plan too. it looks like it could be something.
by Asher
Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:54 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Shadow and Limerick -1st Children's book attempt-
Replies: 6
Views: 1664

I'll get to that ASAP, I'm pretty busy at the time, thanks so much for your critique I will keep it "all" in mind when I edit it.
by Asher
Sun Mar 26, 2006 6:23 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Shadow and Limerick -1st Children's book attempt-
Replies: 6
Views: 1664

full blown, sure! just keep in mind that I haven't editted it yet, this is the first draft like a mentioned, it isn't what I'd call finished. but yes, I want strong criticism not necessarly harsh.
by Asher
Sat Mar 25, 2006 3:14 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Shadow and Limerick -1st Children's book attempt-
Replies: 6
Views: 1664

I know it may be terrible, but couldn't someone share their thoughts.
by Asher
Thu Mar 23, 2006 10:42 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Shadow and Limerick -1st Children's book attempt-
Replies: 6
Views: 1664

Shadow and Limerick -1st Children's book attempt-

It stinks right now, it's a very rough 1st draft, but have faith. This is my first go at writing for children, so I had to go down in vocabulary, content, and so on and so forth. I don't know what I think about it, but I am going to work like heck on eventually. It's a working process I know, just a...
by Asher
Mon Mar 13, 2006 6:18 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Breakfast at Denny's (part 2)
Replies: 12
Views: 4556

wow, I actually read it. It's one of those stories, not the most exciting in the world, but gives you that good feeling inside that makes you want to keep reading. it's not boring at all. I love it.
by Asher
Thu Feb 02, 2006 6:15 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: tribute to a master
Replies: 3
Views: 900

thank you both so much!
by Asher
Tue Jan 31, 2006 2:48 pm
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: tribute to a master
Replies: 3
Views: 900

tribute to a master

Beethoven - a tribute Love- so vital in its words cannot express Torn in the Shadows on the wall- and cries The notes of compassion will cradle and bless To the ears- is forgotten, but in the sunken eyes Valiant and humble, the thunderstorm calls Fate at the door, knocking, it calls Brilliant virtue...
by Asher
Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:55 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: Remember
Replies: 4
Views: 1080

thank you... all three of you.
by Asher
Sun Oct 16, 2005 4:23 pm
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: Debbie
Replies: 18
Views: 2590

you guy's are siblings?

sorry... I'm tired....

but yeah, that was amazing.
by Asher
Sun Oct 02, 2005 11:41 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: Remember
Replies: 4
Views: 1080

Remember

Remember remember the last kiss given to you by your child who is only two remember the times you spent telling a tale by the fire, when plans for going outside, fail remember those who have given you a soul those of whom have made you whole Remember the woman who gave her life to love you, and to b...
by Asher
Fri Sep 30, 2005 9:15 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: **The Poet** (an Ode)
Replies: 12
Views: 2163

I too, was trying to get something on paper about writing, much like my one on music... but no ideas came to mind, I still intend on finding one. You pulled it off. Great job. *claps*
by Asher
Wed Sep 28, 2005 11:37 am
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: **Flowers For Mommy** Forum Award: 6.5.05
Replies: 20
Views: 3593

...oh... wow... that was magnifacent. Using 'mommy' rather than mom or mother was the perfect touch. when using mommy or daddy, and writing from a childs perspective as an adult... it makes the poem all the more moving.. I loved it all, start to finish. One of my favorites by you, honestly.
by Asher
Tue Sep 27, 2005 2:31 pm
Forum: Tom Watson's Whispers
Topic: The Passing Storm
Replies: 23
Views: 9172

wow, that was great... speechless

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