I really like this!
I've not been here for a while, but I'm glad this is the first post I read when I came back.
I must admit, though, I tripped up a little on the last line of the first verse, to me, it doesn't seem to flow as well as the rest of the piece
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- Thu Oct 15, 2015 2:33 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Holding Onto Hate
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3662
- Thu Oct 15, 2015 2:29 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: stigma
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3449
stigma
You don't get a card for depression. No sincere 'please get well soon. ' You're left alone in the dark with no hope or spark, and a night with no stars or moon. When anxiety attacks, no one sees you. No chocolate or grapes come your way. You've put all this on, it's all just in fun... And actually, ...
- Fri Jun 15, 2012 1:12 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: THERE IS A LAND NOT FAR AWAY
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3161
Re: THERE IS A LAND NOT FAR AWAY
i think i would love a land hwere people act because they care. I feel (and fear) that this time has become very apathetic.
- Fri Jun 15, 2012 1:10 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: To My Mother
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2714
Re: To My Mother
im sorry you lost her when you were a child david. I cant imagine mmy mother not being there but we really dont get along
- Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:03 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: To My Mother
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2714
Re: To My Mother
thank you for your reply. Whilst i am glad you liked it i am sorry it reminds you of how things are with your dad!
- Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:00 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: To My Mother
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2714
To My Mother
Is this how it will always be, you and I arguing incessantly? I doubt that we will ever agree on anything beyond our own means. We see each others ignorance as something into which we daily digress - a constant art form of our stress. We rub each other up the best. I'm not sure there's even love or ...
- Thu May 10, 2012 2:33 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: And so myself i tolerate
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2828
Re: And so myself i tolerate
thank you for your comments :)
- Sun May 06, 2012 1:11 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: And so myself i tolerate
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2828
Re: And so myself i tolerate
they told me it did not matter,
the winning. Just the taking part.
It scares me, the differences between
the human head and the human heart
the winning. Just the taking part.
It scares me, the differences between
the human head and the human heart
- Sat May 05, 2012 1:10 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: And so myself i tolerate
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2828
And so myself i tolerate
And so myself i tolerate With myself, i'd be content if i were, perhaps, someone else, lost within some missed concept of life in boxes, neat and shelved. Or maybe if i weren't so flawed or marked, or wrong, or misconstrued; and life were not so open, broad, or not as scary, or untrue. With my deal...
- Sat May 05, 2012 12:04 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: WE'D RATHER TURN AWAY FROM FACT
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4622
Re: WE'D RATHER TURN AWAY FROM FACT
sad, but true in its entirety
- Thu Apr 05, 2012 2:37 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Poetry
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6320
Re: Poetry
I love the thought of seeing what you cannot feel :)
- Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:54 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: A CARDBOARD BOX
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4952
Re: A CARDBOARD BOX
i love this
it's so perceptive in its simplicity and it's whole with such a soft ending that it never even seems to end.
it's so perceptive in its simplicity and it's whole with such a soft ending that it never even seems to end.
- Fri Mar 30, 2012 4:37 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Loss
- Replies: 0
- Views: 1142
Loss
Loss and they’ll talk about it later with no-one else about. Talk about that thing that no-one understands: that they could talk about now, after the fact, but no. Together. Curled up warm and safe with each other. Then, only then, will they console themselves with their privacy. Share their though...
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 4:10 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Not Black
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2125
Re: Not Black
I don't think I've ever seen it, sorry!
- Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:08 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Not Black
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2125
Not Black
Not Black if you could see me now bet you would laugh. Dressed in pyjamas that my nana gave me, some kind of blue that is crossed between 'sky' and 'powderpuff.' With lace at the ends of the arms; yellow and frilly. They didn't fit her. I bet her bust was too big or her hips too narrow. Made for 'la...