Poetry Pages

i just found out,It was nice knowing that such an amazing person was out there. i cant believe hes gone

VERY entertaining, and so unique! You're imagery was great, very much enjoyed-Jess*

WOW You are sooo very talented girl!! I was instantly pulled in and it flowed so quickly and smoothly. The emotion came through so heavy and heartfelt, wonderful write-Jess*

Melinda- Thanks so much for your kind words and critique! I agree with the line breaks, and as for the 'I' capitialization and the elipsis missing a dot, they were simply typos due to my poor and fast trying skills :lol: And yes i did mean 'than' :grin: Thanks so much for pointing out the little fla...

Honest and poignant, sighhh first love -Jess*

Hello Melinda!! It soo nice to meet you as well! Thank You SO SO much for you're kind feedback it is REALLY appreciated, i haven't been able to write anything besides papers for years so it really made my day seein your comment :mrgreen: It feels good to be creative again, and i am definitely always...

Thanks moonflower, its good to hear from you. Thanks for the reply -Jess*

Full moon bleeding into the horizon of Eastern skies, barnyard lights blinking dimly throughout my unfocused gaze. Freight delays do nothing but bide the ache while I attempt to stand strong in this loves' departed wake. Arctic spruces fly by with frosted tips while wisps of reluctant snowfall melt ...

Jim- Sorry im so late on expressing my appreciation for all your hard work, saying i havent been on the pages in forever is an enormous understatement..I'm pretty bummed that a few of my favorites have been deleted, and for some reason most of the ones that were saved were from when i was 13-14 year...

Entirely speechless, so beautiful andy thank you

you get used to being alone.
and thats okay..
but you never get used to being with her

makes my heartache..your writing never ceases to mesmerize me ..always~Jess*

Andy, its because you've written things like this that i can't imagine a love more selfless and true than what we have been blessed to experience...although there has been so much pain and separation to endure I am so glad you are in my life and even happier that i am able to read this on days when ...

:sigh: ...so good to finally read something from you in this forum again...beautiful Andrew~always...Jess*

I think this is brilliant. It flows so well and its really touching-very sweet,~always...Slayer*

F- -in loved it...glad i got a chance to stop in and read this one. Excellent as always Thief~always...Slayer*

..so wonderful~always...Slayer*