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- Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:22 pm
- Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
- Topic: lets do it for H
- Replies: 25
- Views: 11743
Re: lets do it for H
Hi guys missed ya. Luvin this weather. It was a balmy 61 degrees when I woke up today and my husband just asked me if he could close the window...cuz get this...he's freezin. Its about 70 right now. Every guest we are getting is from Kansas, Missouri, Oklahom and Texas...all running from the heat an...
- Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:37 pm
- Forum: Fun & Games
- Topic: My living will
- Replies: 9
- Views: 10923
Re: My living will
A rabbit walked into a bar?
- Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:35 pm
- Forum: In Tribute
- Topic: I didn't get to say Good Bye 5/31/06 about grampa
- Replies: 2
- Views: 5835
Re: I didn't get to say Good Bye 5/31/06 about grampa
Glad ya had him. I stood my Grandma up Thanksgiving 1995. She died Christmas Eve.
I can relate. It took a while but I came to understand that it wasn't her last moments
but all those moments that came before that mattered.
I'm glad I had her and I'm glad you had him.
I can relate. It took a while but I came to understand that it wasn't her last moments
but all those moments that came before that mattered.
I'm glad I had her and I'm glad you had him.
- Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:30 pm
- Forum: Love and Romance
- Topic: Sent in for publication Off to war
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7108
Re: Sent in for publication Off to war
I don't read chicken soup....but hey, I read YOUR POEM!
And I loved it. Very descriptive. I could see it happening.
Very Good.
And I loved it. Very descriptive. I could see it happening.
Very Good.
- Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:22 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: The Anger That Kills
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4027
Re: The Anger That Kills
I think whats missing is the twist. What lies beneath the anger...what the anger conceals...pain I think somehow if you could twist the end to show its the unbearable pain that causes the anger which is directed inward and results in the suicide. I think. :?: Or maybe not. :shrug: I like it. But I a...
- Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:07 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Self Awareness (look what you made me do...)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 8053
Re: Self Awareness (look what you made me do...)
I like it a lot.
Why do we fight so hard to maintain our right to be miserable?
Yes. I like it very much.
Why do we fight so hard to maintain our right to be miserable?
Yes. I like it very much.
- Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:03 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Wrong?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1947
Re: Wrong?
I don't know why nobody responded to this. I rather like it.
- Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:02 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Wind
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4835
Re: Wind
I look forward to reading more.
PS
I'm glad you're better.
croc
PS
I'm glad you're better.
croc
- Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:58 pm
- Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
- Topic: lets do it for H
- Replies: 25
- Views: 11743
Re: lets do it for H
100 degrees here today too. poor dog hasn't been walked in 9 days.
Cant wait to get out of here. Who's idea was it to build on top of a swamp?
Cant wait to get out of here. Who's idea was it to build on top of a swamp?
- Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:28 pm
- Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
- Topic: Christmas Decorations
- Replies: 28
- Views: 10504
Re: Christmas Decorations
I wanna go! :hello: I can get us a tank! :wink: I know where there are lots of them and they still let me in... (and I'll bet the idiots still use the same combinations). I can drive em i can fire em and i can make damn sure we hit what we're aiming at. :thumbsup: Sure glad my whole youth wasn't was...
- Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:54 pm
- Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
- Topic: Christmas Decorations
- Replies: 28
- Views: 10504
Re: Christmas Decorations
what makes you all so sure you didn't miss it.
- Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:41 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Read & Critique. Third Person Short Story, Help?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3486
Re: Read & Critique. Third Person Short Story, Help?
Its an ancient celtic swear word I'm guessing. get him H.
- Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:46 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The War I Wage
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1334
The War I Wage
Screaming to be heard pain lost within the words. What does it matter? It seems it never has....and perhaps it never will but silence kills. Begging to be felt? To be known and understood...and to be loved? That hurts too much. Its easier to rage and thats the war I wage against your apathy. I could...
- Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:35 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Ode to Scrooge
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1848
Re: Ode to Scrooge
Bah humbug. Scrooge was a coward.
You couldn't possibly be.
The world is rude and selfish...yes. But I don't have to be. Though once they had me trained, I am learning a better way.
No longer a coward myself.
HOWEVER....I DO NOT WATCH THE NEWS!
All that said I like your poem.
You couldn't possibly be.
The world is rude and selfish...yes. But I don't have to be. Though once they had me trained, I am learning a better way.
No longer a coward myself.
HOWEVER....I DO NOT WATCH THE NEWS!
All that said I like your poem.
- Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:27 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Read & Critique. Third Person Short Story, Help?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3486
Re: Read & Critique. Third Person Short Story, Help?
I'm no professional writer so keep that in mind. This leaves me wondering what the third person is talking about. The teen, her admirer or her situation. Seems like it should say something like "he watches from the window of the house they share" instead of the wording you chose. (though the descrip...