Search found 110 matches
- Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:31 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Once I leave my city’s sky
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3401
Re: Once I leave my city’s sky
love the title and evocative imagery as well!
- Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:29 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Kismet
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2477
Re: Kismet
insightful, enojoyable read.
- Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:28 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Nothing
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2397
Re: The Nothing
love, love love this. it struck a chord for me as well, but for different reasons.. to me, this is a perfect description of a person who has become jaded because of experiencing hurt in past relationships. the result is that they put up a defensive, impervious walls around their heart and emotions w...
- Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:49 am
- Forum: Love and Romance
- Topic: In Your Garden
- Replies: 11
- Views: 8104
Re: In Your Garden
Gorgeous!
- Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:28 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Eunuch, Enough
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2114
Re: Eunuch, Enough
thanks for the read & comments
- Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:20 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Nothing Compares
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5623
Re: Nothing Compares
this is adorable. i hope the object of your affection had a chance to see and appreciate this!!
- Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:04 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The World Slipped Through My Fingers
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3481
Re: The World Slipped Through My Fingers
i second moonflower's comments. this was an excellent depiction with such intelligent insight of feeling static and stuck watching the world go by.
- Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:50 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Woe
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1965
Re: Woe
this is beautiful!! love the imagery and metaphors.
- Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:48 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Peripheral Vision
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2296
Re: Peripheral Vision
thank you both for the read and comments.
poeticpiers, believe me, the resistance is for my own good.
poeticpiers, believe me, the resistance is for my own good.
- Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:46 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Guardian
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1356
Re: Guardian
sad thoughts, but true. nicely written.
- Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:37 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: For Someone Else To Cry
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3235
Re: For Someone Else To Cry
wow.. great write..
- Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:14 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Peripheral Vision
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2296
Peripheral Vision
Peripheral Vision I am strong stronger than his arms than the slightly browned tightly wound sinews swelling in succession my resolve is loud louder than his voice than the soft sounds laced with cruelty snaking in, out and around my morality my will is firm firmer than his hands than the memory of...
- Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:54 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Six Words
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3334
Re: Six Words
simple, but awesome... indifference is definitely the most cruel.
- Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:46 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Natural Artistry.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2077
Re: Natural Artistry.
i enjoyed reading your poem as a whole, but this line stuck out to me in particular:
But I prefer the evidence
which is provided by my eyes.
Great message in here that sometimes less is more...
But I prefer the evidence
which is provided by my eyes.
Great message in here that sometimes less is more...
- Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:42 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Heartstrings
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2757
Re: Heartstrings
love this! it's so fluid that i could definitely hear this set to music. nice rhythm & structure as well.