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love the title and evocative imagery as well!

insightful, enojoyable read.

love, love love this. it struck a chord for me as well, but for different reasons.. to me, this is a perfect description of a person who has become jaded because of experiencing hurt in past relationships. the result is that they put up a defensive, impervious walls around their heart and emotions w...

Gorgeous!

thanks for the read & comments

this is adorable. i hope the object of your affection had a chance to see and appreciate this!!

i second moonflower's comments. this was an excellent depiction with such intelligent insight of feeling static and stuck watching the world go by.

this is beautiful!! love the imagery and metaphors.

thank you both for the read and comments.

poeticpiers, believe me, the resistance is for my own good.

sad thoughts, but true. nicely written.

wow.. great write..

Peripheral Vision I am strong stronger than his arms than the slightly browned tightly wound sinews swelling in succession my resolve is loud louder than his voice than the soft sounds laced with cruelty snaking in, out and around my morality my will is firm firmer than his hands than the memory of...

simple, but awesome... indifference is definitely the most cruel.

i enjoyed reading your poem as a whole, but this line stuck out to me in particular:

But I prefer the evidence
which is provided by my eyes.

Great message in here that sometimes less is more...

love this! it's so fluid that i could definitely hear this set to music. nice rhythm & structure as well.