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by JadedHopes
Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:31 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Once I leave my city’s sky
Replies: 7
Views: 998

Re: Once I leave my city’s sky

love the title and evocative imagery as well!
by JadedHopes
Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:29 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Kismet
Replies: 4
Views: 744

Re: Kismet

insightful, enojoyable read.
by JadedHopes
Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:28 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Nothing
Replies: 4
Views: 859

Re: The Nothing

love, love love this. it struck a chord for me as well, but for different reasons.. to me, this is a perfect description of a person who has become jaded because of experiencing hurt in past relationships. the result is that they put up a defensive, impervious walls around their heart and emotions w...
by JadedHopes
Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:49 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: In Your Garden
Replies: 11
Views: 3457

Re: In Your Garden

Gorgeous!
by JadedHopes
Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:28 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Eunuch, Enough
Replies: 3
Views: 643

Re: Eunuch, Enough

thanks for the read & comments :grin:
by JadedHopes
Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:20 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Nothing Compares
Replies: 10
Views: 2350

Re: Nothing Compares

this is adorable. i hope the object of your affection had a chance to see and appreciate this!!
by JadedHopes
Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:04 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The World Slipped Through My Fingers
Replies: 6
Views: 1153

Re: The World Slipped Through My Fingers

i second moonflower's comments. this was an excellent depiction with such intelligent insight of feeling static and stuck watching the world go by.
by JadedHopes
Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:50 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Woe
Replies: 3
Views: 619

Re: Woe

this is beautiful!! love the imagery and metaphors.
by JadedHopes
Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:48 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Peripheral Vision
Replies: 3
Views: 742

Re: Peripheral Vision

thank you both for the read and comments.

poeticpiers, believe me, the resistance is for my own good. :wink:
by JadedHopes
Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:46 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Guardian
Replies: 1
Views: 396

Re: Guardian

sad thoughts, but true. nicely written.
by JadedHopes
Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:37 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: For Someone Else To Cry
Replies: 7
Views: 1021

Re: For Someone Else To Cry

wow.. great write.. :thewave:
by JadedHopes
Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:14 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Peripheral Vision
Replies: 3
Views: 742

Peripheral Vision

Peripheral Vision I am strong stronger than his arms than the slightly browned tightly wound sinews swelling in succession my resolve is loud louder than his voice than the soft sounds laced with cruelty snaking in, out and around my morality my will is firm firmer than his hands than the memory of...
by JadedHopes
Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:54 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Six Words
Replies: 7
Views: 1004

Re: Six Words

simple, but awesome... indifference is definitely the most cruel. :bump:
by JadedHopes
Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:46 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Natural Artistry.
Replies: 3
Views: 726

Re: Natural Artistry.

i enjoyed reading your poem as a whole, but this line stuck out to me in particular:

But I prefer the evidence
which is provided by my eyes.

Great message in here that sometimes less is more... :thumbsup:
by JadedHopes
Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:42 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Heartstrings
Replies: 5
Views: 809

Re: Heartstrings

love this! it's so fluid that i could definitely hear this set to music. nice rhythm & structure as well.

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